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Achilles  to Patroclus

Should
Have
Been
Me,
Washed
Out
To
Sea.
You’ve
Left
Ca-
Tas-
Tro-
Phe.
[2]
Achilles  to Patroclus

Should
Have
Been
Me,
Washed
Out
To
Sea.
My
Sword&#8217;s
Ca-
Tas-
Tro-
Phe.

I made the change from “You’ve / Left” to “My / Sword’s” in this skinny sonnet in an attempt to enrich the poem, to pack as much as I could into the fourteen syllables I allowed myself. “You’ve / Left” is implied in the poem’s title, “Achilles to Patroclus,” [...]]]></description>
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